Choklad's application

[Naamandre3]

Everything seems fine except one thing.
You never stated where he is now or where this conversation takes place.
is it in the inn of kiwike? Or does he meet the person someone else and goes to kiwike with him?

And on a more practical note, if he sails with him and teaches the kid. how do people get to meet him if he's not played by someone else?

You have to clear that up.