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[Choklad]

Everything seems fine except one thing.
You never stated where he is now or where this conversation takes place.
is it in the inn of kiwike? Or does he meet the person someone else and goes to kiwike with him?

And on a more practical note, if he sails with him and teaches the kid. how do people get to meet him if he's not played by someone else?

You have to clear that up.

The Inn is in no specific place, and the man that he meets is John Silver, TheCreator's character but I didn't think I needed to include that.
Anyways, they set sail in the land of Kiwike and by now it's the current time.

It seems that you are asking more of people who actually try to make up a story than the ones who doesn't really bother. Seems abit unfair if you ask me, since all we want to do is to get online and Roleplay.