Choklad's application

[Saera]

We don't have high hopes for those who don't really bother. We do try to push them, and sometimes it turns out way better than before. For others, after 4-5 attempts you kind of have to know when to stop.

But reading a really good lore makes us want to see how far you can make the story even better. And you don't need too many changes, just a couple of clarifications, like how you and your mentor sailed the seas till you found the land of Kiwike.

Also, if you haven't already, post your edited application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...ry13972356

Oh also, welcome to Kiwike.