Choklad's application

[Naamandre3]

The Inn is in no specific place, and the man that he meets is John Silver, TheCreator's character but I didn't think I needed to include that.
Anyways, they set sail in the land of Kiwike and by now it's the current time.

It seems that you are asking more of people who actually try to make up a story than the ones who doesn't really bother. Seems abit unfair if you ask me, since all we want to do is to get online and Roleplay.

I'm just asking cause i like to know. a background should be somewhat bullet proof other people try to write a story as well. but some are not as talented in it as you might be.
Like Saera pointed out. By pointing out flaws and errors we strive to see who cares to improve it and show dedication and if we can make it some better as well.

I did not mean to offend you or make you think i ask more of you just because can roleplay.
i was just doing my job