Application - kampman

[Saera]

Its getting there. But you've missed a few points that I pointed out earlier. How did he come to Kiwike? A little more details about the Dwarven Mages.

Also, you can add more to your physical description. I'm going by how your skin looks like, so maybe "silvery metal with blue(?) lights emitting from the visor, chest and various locations around the body".