Application- Dillpickle789

[Saera]

An interesting story. I like your writing style, though I'd like to see it more fleshed out. Maybe about what he was before he died, or does he not remember at all? Mmm the only thing you do need to add is how he ended up on Kiwike. Just a simple line for that will do.

Even a zombie has a description. Rotting flesh, bones showing beneath them, describe article of clothing, anything you'd like to take note of.

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Good good. All the pieces are falling in place.

Welcome to Kiwike.