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04-07-2012, 20:17,

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Saera

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RE: Application - toon13956824

Ok, story looks good now. However, you forgot to change your age of 15. Based on your story, I'd say your character should be 20 years old or so.

You just need to edit your original post in this thread.

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Application - toon13956824 - by toon13956824 - 04-07-2012, 15:22

RE: Application - toon13956824 - by Saera - 04-07-2012, 18:06

RE: Application - toon13956824 - by toon13956824 - 04-07-2012, 18:28

RE: Application - toon13956824 - by Saera - 04-07-2012, 20:17

RE: Application - toon13956824 - by toon13956824 - 04-07-2012, 20:29

RE: Application - toon13956824 - by Saera - 04-07-2012, 20:53

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