Application - toon13956824

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Appointed as captain when he was 12? I find that pretty hard to believe. Also, the age information is for your character, not yourself. I also doubt a 15 year old would be going around hunting dragons.

You can just edit your post instead of making a new thread.

Ok, story looks good now. However, you forgot to change your age of 15. Based on your story, I'd say your character should be 20 years old or so.

You just need to edit your original post in this thread.

i think it's ok now