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Application - Deeox2
04-08-2012, 05:12,
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RE: An Application
What I find more confusing is him bolting away instead of alerting his fellow villagers and family. Just my thought. Its up to you if you want to change that or keep it. Other than that the story seems good.

Also, the thread title should be "application - Deeox2"

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Application - Deeox2 - by Deeox2 - 04-08-2012, 05:07
RE: An Application - by Saera - 04-08-2012, 05:12
RE: Application - Deeox2 - by Deeox2 - 04-08-2012, 05:15
RE: Application - Deeox2 - by Saera - 04-08-2012, 05:23

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