(04-28-2012, 02:36)Saera Wrote: Hmmm, I am thinking that you need to expand on your story a little, like what did he do during the time you lived in the kingdom. Also need more description of your character (green cloak, boots, etc) , not just "wear things that look like Zelda", which btw isn't Link, unless you do wear a purple lace gown with a tiara.
Background: Foolingyou was the son of a jester. He and his father lived in the kingdom of Will. In the kingdom of will he served the king of Will with his father. He jester-ed for the people to. He went around town alone and entertained to people with hi cool tricks and great flips to earn extra few dollars. At the age of 15 my father died. In his will he said that i will want you to use all the will you got to find a great place to make your own. As i traveled for the first year i crossed the land of goo. Where things were just goo. It was a horrible so i choose to move on. For 2 years straight i traveled town to town looking for that one place that i could make my own. Then i cam across the land of Kiwike. I feel that this place is the place to be and there are great people here when i first got here. This looks like a place that my father wanted me to make my own.
Description: I wear a green hat, a green chest piece with a satchel across my chest, with gloves. boots and patted green pants
