Application-boxmangrant

[Saera]

You got a story going, I like the content but you'd need to write it in a way that interests readers. Firstly, flesh out the story a bit more, tell me more about Nut Wolfbane, his father. Maybe more info about this Aging potion you found. Anything extra you can think of you include in your story.

Also, if you haven't, post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...ed__st__80 as well.

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Ahh, much better now.

Last thing to do is to post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...ed__st__80 then you will be whitelisted.