Vortus's Application

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Vortus's Application

05-18-2012, 23:31, (This post was last modified: 05-18-2012, 23:51 by Saera.)

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RE: Vortus's Application

Your physical description is very vivid, I like that. Though, you are missing the background story required for you character.

Good good. Though I'd love to see the part on how he found his way to Kiwike. After that, you are good to go.

Welcome to Kiwike.

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Vortus's Application - by Vortus - 05-18-2012, 23:20

RE: Vortus's Application - by Saera - 05-18-2012, 23:31

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