My Aplication- MerthasM

Saera · 05-21-2012, 01:26,

You summarized what the malkirans are, but it would be nice to read more about your character's own history, like how his life was like, and why was he exiled.

Your objective seems, a bit fuzzy. Maybe a more refined objective?

Also, I'd preferably wait for the skin to be finished before I will whitelist you.

Don't forget to post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...d__st__140 as well.