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06-20-2012, 01:54,

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RE: Application- (colemertz)

Alright looks much better but why did he leave when his commander died? I would put in that the commander was his father or something because that would create grief and your character couldve left because he could not stand returning home withought his father

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Application- (colemertz) - by ColeMertz - 06-19-2012, 04:30

RE: Application- (colemertz) - by theonedoctor - 06-19-2012, 04:37

RE: Application- (colemertz) - by Leech - 06-19-2012, 04:38

RE: Application- (colemertz) - by ColeMertz - 06-19-2012, 05:11

RE: Application- (colemertz) - by Saera - 06-19-2012, 17:31

RE: Application- (colemertz) - by ColeMertz - 06-19-2012, 22:45

RE: Application- (colemertz) - by theonedoctor - 06-20-2012, 01:54

RE: Application- (colemertz) - by ColeMertz - 06-20-2012, 02:05

RE: Application- (colemertz) - by Saera - 06-20-2012, 03:21

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