Application - jjthejr1

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I swear these apps are all the same... In addition to Saera's feedback, does your character have any more... Ehh... specific goals?

The only time when somebody's life is actually different is if their life is actually normal or doesn't have to do with bad guys burning down villages.

Doesn't seem to hard of a formula to break, but oh well. A whitelister's lament.

[Insert random name found at baby names website] 's [family, village] was [attacked, burned, pillaged] at only age [insert young age here]. S/he ditches her [family, village] and there's a 0.00% chance s/he saves anyone or any of her/his family members are alive. It just so happens that s/he can [use a bow, use a sword, use a knife, hunt, stab random strangers in the back without wincing, make a camp fire] because (her, his) father taught (her, him). S/he wants [revenge, find out who dun it, cookies].

Here's the formula!

Anyways, back on topic; try to make your story better either in terms of detail or a story that is more unique.