slutyapron69's app

[andy66252]

I would suggest elaborating in your back story more. How did she become poor? How and why did she come to kiwike? What was her life like growing up? You may also want to add more to your objectives. Does she want to build a family? Does she want to get rich? These are just some examples on how it could be improved. I believe it really needs elaborated before it will be accepted