(08-04-2012, 00:53)Saera Wrote: That's a good start, though perhaps a little story on how your character find his way to Kiwike.
Well, it was on a steamin' summer nightfall when I went out fishin' fer a nocturnal type 'o shark. th' sweat stained me forehead as I saw th' ripple on th' water surface comin' towards me. Growin' wit' each meter it came closer. th' ripples soon turned into waves 'n were goin' fast beyond me comprehension. I was frozen by fear 'n fer less than a second I saw me life flashin' by before me eyes. Suddenly, th' surface burst 'n a boat came out 'o th' rum usin' a 4-piston engine at th' back to make a circular motion 'n gift th' vehicle speed. Through th' glass in th' front I saw me bucko sittin' in font 'o dozens 'o levers. She walked out 'n told me: "Get ye groove on soldier!" as I was pale as that nightfall's lit side 'o th' moon. As I closed me mouth, which had be open fer quite a while, she asked me if I would like to give a go'. I wasn't sure at first, skeptical as I be most 'o th' the hour, I refused sayin' it was too dangerous. Alas she looked into me eyes 'n asked: "Please?". I could not resist it 'n we both got in quickly. While controllin' th' buttons 'n addin' some extra RMS's to prevent th' engine from overheatin' she told me how she 'n her salty dad built th' sea monster 'o a submarine. "He told me it was impossible when I showed him th' redprints" ,she said, "yet we started craftin' 'n soon we found a solution fer th' lack 'o air underwater." We submerged whilst she explained thar was a certain kind 'o plant called 'Lily Pads' that absorbed rum 'n converted it into air that be radiated off 'o it in 12-hour cycles. They collected a few 'n put them in wooden barrels, 'n they found themselves having tanks 'o green that refreshed th' air in th' ship itself! "Unbelievable", I said, "How did ye find out 'bout that?" Apparently their cat had be stuck in a sealed barrel fer 5 days wit' these plants 'n they started investigatin' both th' animal 'n th' Lily Pads. They soon found th' unique radiation 'o breathable air 'n used it to their advantage. While I listened to her tech-speak we found ourselves deeper 'n deeper, way deeper than any human be 'n it was gettin' dark. Too dark fer me eyes to distin'uish between me hand 'n th' panel 'o levers. "Whoah, that's convenient!" I told her when she put on th' lights. Suddenly I heard a wee crack, 'n rum started leakin' in. "Oh-oh" I heard 'n th' entire boat did somethin' unbelievable. TNT explodes, but th' boat did th' opposite. It collapsed 'n 'imploded'. th' problem be: we were still in it. I got knocked unconscious 'n th' next 'tis I remember be wakin' up on th' shore 'o some land I be not familiar wit'. I walked fer days 'til I found civilization. 'n here I be getting my groove on and moistening my towelettes.
