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08-08-2012, 04:17, (This post was last modified: 08-08-2012, 04:18 by Riskae.)

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RE: Character Application

Seems a bit disjointed, I can't always tell who your pronouns are referring to. Is Bethina the lover? You may want to reread it and clarify some parts, other than that you seem to have a good foundation and with some minor edits you'd be good to go.

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Character Application - by Rosie - 08-08-2012, 00:22

RE: Character Application - by Riskae - 08-08-2012, 04:17

RE: Character Application - by Saera - 08-08-2012, 05:10

RE: Character Application - by sethd13 - 08-08-2012, 05:11

RE: Character Application - by Saera - 08-08-2012, 05:45

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