What is dead may never die

[guthriearmstrong]

((I would suggest changing the "suddenly" part there are better ways to transition a sudden action scene and the cape part could be reworded it seems like it was just sort of thrown in there, though I understand it's importance as a symbol of power. Also could you tell me what augments are? (I got that they were a coat of arms or something but not exactly sure.) I liked the ending it was very gripping also good imagery I really felt like I was there.))

((I agree, I hate that cliche. And it's a hard habit to break.))