What is dead may never die

[Riskae]

((I would suggest changing the "suddenly" part there are better ways to transition a sudden action scene and the cape part could be reworded it seems like it was just sort of thrown in there, though I understand it's importance as a symbol of power. Also could you tell me what augments are? (I got that they were a coat of arms or something but not exactly sure.) I liked the ending it was very gripping also good imagery I really felt like I was there.))

((I agree, I hate that cliche. And it's a hard habit to break.))

((Yeah, I've been guilty of it before myself.))

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((The term phony comes to mind when I see certain posts.

Not yours thornax. I kinda sorta love you.

((Crash, we don't need posts like this. You deliberately try to upset people then brush it off. If you want to post things like this then take it to some other forum.))