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[chaz03088]

Uh, what? All you added was that he was accepted, and lived peacefully. You just added one more sentence on what was already there. That's not more story, that's just slapping on one little thing that really doesn't say anything more about your character.

Edit: He changed it to the shelters and fires thing. I still go by what I say, that is not adding any more story, that's just slapping on another short sentence that doesn't add anything to the story whatsoever.