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[spenboy]

You gotta add more to the story, think of it this way,
If you are lacking in taste wit your main course, don't try to cover it up with a small side dish, the main meal will still be crappy, and the customer will be wondering why the heck you fed them it when it wasn't good

Try more stuff about the nation he was from,

Also, why exactly did his dad jut abandon him in the woods?