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08-23-2012, 18:51,
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RE: Application Raritythepony
(08-23-2012, 05:40)Saera Wrote: It is a well-written story, but it feels like its been used too much already, the entire "village gets plundered and he survived/ran, get revenge". Perhaps there is something else that could be added to the story.

I took your comment and changed the story entirley, hope you enjoi!
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Application Raritythepony - by Raritythepony - 08-23-2012, 02:25
RE: Application Raritythepony - by bvcxzmn - 08-23-2012, 02:42
RE: Application Raritythepony - by Saera - 08-23-2012, 05:40
RE: Application Raritythepony - by Raritythepony - 08-23-2012, 18:51
RE: Application Raritythepony - by Spammuff - 08-23-2012, 12:54
RE: Application Raritythepony - by Saera - 08-23-2012, 20:41

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