(10-05-2012, 20:34)iDieForEXP Wrote: Hey there! Welcome to Kiwike, I'm sure you'll love it here. Some comments on your application; The general background story is a bit short, but that's not the main issue. One of the things that irks the white-listers, is that 85% of the applications we get involve parent deaths. And 60% of that 85% want to seek out the ones who did it and get revenge. Not that your story won't work, it's just that you might want to add more details, imagery, make a story out of it. It'll get the listers' mind off of the cliche. Also I'd like to end by saying that we're getting a new wave of players just as the server begins to undergo some serious renovations. We're splitting our one server into two, with one focused solely on the joys of roleplaying. So this means that our community may not be active in-game, but the forums are still very active. While we wait to release new information to everyone, please hop around the forums, get to know some people. We've got a great community here, and it would be awesome if you wanted to be a part of it!
hi!
firstly thanks for replying to my post
and thanks as well for the advice about my story line (i will change that), also what does the other half of the server do then?
thanks again
stealth_ninjia
Application - stealth_ninjia
