I made a bio in 15 min here... Though I will be changing it a lot.
Quote:Unreal's story
Born in the lost woods of Ar'sun where the last troll tribes took refuge from the
dwarfs and elves who have united against them and drove them out of they're homeland.
Being son of the Gran'dez the quick he grew up in the Stoneaxe tribe as a hunter.
His father and mother were killed in the "Red day" where the Redsparks attacked his tribe with
(for the troll's at that time unknown) explosive weapons, setting the most of the huts on fire.
Wanting revenge he went out alone with just a bow and some arrows. Blinded with rage he
didn't look out for traps and step on a pressure plate setting of some explosives.
The force of the explosives threw him against a tree knocking him unconus.
He woke up in a underground mine forced to work. He found out that the Redsparks made a treaty
with the dwarfs. If they destroy every other tribe and accept the authority of the dwarfs
they will give them technology and gold.
1 year later he joined a group of workers that were trying to escape trough a new ravine that
was just found. He sees creatures like creepers for the first time in his life
and learns a hole new meaning of fear in that ravine.
After a few days of traveling they lost 23 people in that cave out of 29, and
finally got out.
It was the first time a troll walked on the troll homeland in 100 years.
I think that the story is predictable and I just list the things that he was doing...
Im not a good writer.
Any tips?
CHARACTER BIO (for revamped)
