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11-02-2011, 22:27,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
(11-02-2011, 20:04)Android Wrote: The comet is going to miss.
quiet you!
You wot?
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11-03-2011, 09:36,
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Spammuff
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Update: A set of revisions have been undertook, by me and the editors, allowing them to fix some of the errors themselves.
Also this has been posted on Ponychan fic training grounds for review (one of the most super review threads)
I'll hope to get alot of responses
-Nix_Spark
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11-03-2011, 16:08,
(This post was last modified: 11-03-2011, 18:43 by Spammuff.)
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Update: Image is being reworked, ( Found a problem with the spelling of Strength, when i spelt it as strenth.... FFFUUUU)
And i am probably going to create a desktop image for me tonight so some of the story editing will be left for the editors....
I cannot believe droid didn't point out my clearly visible spelling fail.
TSKTSK
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11-03-2011, 16:35,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
You mean the one in that sentence? 'visible'?
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11-03-2011, 18:23,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Wut you talking bout Willis?
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11-04-2011, 07:32,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Spam, if you want, I can go through the story and completely wipe it of all grammatical errors. It would be my pleasure, and frankly, once I'm done with it, I doubt you'll need any more edits on it. I'm more than a little bit of a grammar freak.
Love,
Gecko
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11-04-2011, 13:09,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Please do... I swear I need all the Gnazies to rip this to hell, because there are so many errors...
At the moment I have a ToDo list with me and the editors, they will be working though all of the errors that are listed.
Ponychan haven't answered back, once they do the error list will be probably over 100 pages.
And then it will be perfect.
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11-04-2011, 21:36,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Update: Captain Steve has took over the Reviewing from Ponychan...
I hope he posts a review soonish..
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11-05-2011, 00:38,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Steven is reviewing this?
![[Image: LHjSe.gif]](http://i.imgur.com/LHjSe.gif)
It will be fabuloooooooooooooooooouuuuuuuus
(10-14-2012, 06:21)sethd13 Wrote: 9/10 actually really liked that <3 party always has good music ![[Image: Kon-Signature-2.gif]](http://i564.photobucket.com/albums/ss89/JRendell21/Graphics/Kon-Signature-2.gif)
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11-05-2011, 07:26,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
What is a "Captain Steve"? O.o
RIP Virus Signature
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