Application - Conor1121

[conor1121]

General

Minecraft Name:Conor1121
Previous RP experiences: Kiwike 1.0 and 2.0(was on 1.0 for a very short time)
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: Yes, haven't really left it, but don't usually play on it anymore
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: Revamped
How did you hear about Kiwike: Pwolbart, Nlewis told me about it

Character

Character Name:Conor
Gender:Boy
Age:14

General Background Information:
I was a Halo Spartan. My ship was on its way to the Covenant, when my drop pod dislodged. I floated through space for about a day and ended up on this strange planet. I was surviving in the forest for 2 years, when I was walking and stumbled upon a town. There I killed many people, and broke my gun. I usually like to be peaceful now, and I also dont like to steal. I usally like to build things, and use redstone.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character):Halo Spartan

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?:Gain more money to create a redstone oriented store, and to build a faster way of transportation than minecarts

Picture of your minecraft skin:

[Crashlander04]

14 year old spartan..

[sethd13]

for once I agree with crash 14 year old space warrior?

[Unreal22]

General Background Information:
I was a Halo Spartan. My ship was on its way to the Covenant, when my drop pod dislodged. I floated through space for about a day and ended up on this strange planet. I was surviving in the forest for 2 years, when I was walking and stumbled upon a town. There I killed many people, and broke my gun. I usually like to be peaceful now, and I also dont like to steal. I usally like to build things, and use redstone.

Seems legit.

[squiggley1]

Meanwhile on kiwike...

[Crashlander04]

Meanwhile on kiwike...

[Android]

I don't know if this makes any sense.

Also, at fourteen the candidates were still being trained to become Spartans. On top of this, why were you in your drop pod when your ship hadn't even reached the Covenant, which, by the way, is a group of several species of aliens, not a place as you make it sound.

I don't feel as if you put any effort in this at all.

Denied.

[Crashlander04]

they weren't called halo spartans either..

nor would a spartan put leather armour over his armour..

also, you wouldn't be dropping to the Covenant (assuming you mean a base of their own and not a pre-existing gravitational planet or forerunner installation) in a drop pod.

in addition, drop pods in frigates don't exactly dislodge - there are multiple commands that have to be given to release them into orbit, and if it did 'dislodge' there's a pretty good chance the UNSC wouldn't just leave you floating around in space.

you'd also hope a Spartan (from pretty damn far in the future too) wouldn't simply walk into a town and kill everybody. or become a pacifist either for that matter.

[squiggley1]

Even then you stated that your character was 14 NOW, meaning he was 12 when he dropped down to kiwike. I refuse to believe that a 12 year old was sent to war even if he was a spartan.

[geckosquid]

Also, your possession of Spartan armor doesn't really make sense, seeing as you'll be just as easy to kill as anyone else.

I suggest you come up with a completely original story, as this approaches fan fiction rather than RP.