Application - killnoob456

[Killnoob456]

General

Minecraft Name:Killnoob456
Previous RP experiences:runescape, wow, skyrim ect.
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?:I have only played on one server, before this one that my best friend started
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?:the fact that you can start your own nations and join and help others
How did you hear about Kiwike:a current member advised me to join.

Character

Character Name:killnoob456
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle)rraku fields
Gender:male
Age:23

General Background Information:killnoob456 was Born from the elders/rulers of the land to the west called zanzia, when he was only 16, he was banished for the betrayal of his father when he informed his nations weaknesses to an opposing nation,called hatowakia, for a large cash reward . When he then tryed to claim the reward he was promised from the hatowakans ( barbarians ) they ignored that he had done anything at all for them. In his rage he took the leader of the hatowakans sword( which he later called "fangs sting" ) and then proceeded to murder the almighty zon, (the leader of the hatowakans). This action was not taken lightly and almost got him killed multiple times while escapeing the land of the hatowakans.Now with two nations mortally angered at him and would probably kill him if he stepped foot back in thier territorries, he set his trail to the north in hopes he would find a suitible land.although he was banished he keeps a good spirit throughout life, and for the most part is a nice and respectable citizen

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character):Always wearing lavishly decorated armour( mostly gold trim)this player is in a great physical shape and can take on almost any one who opposes him

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?:join a neighboring nation then eventually gain respect from the people in that nation , and revolt against the leader and start a nation of my own

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):Ummm.. I made my skin on an app that automatically uploads the skin I created to my minecraft player , therefore stopping me from posting the skin to this application, i swear the skin is exactly as i described it. please accept me although I have this one problem with my application.

[geckosquid]

I'm sorry, but you'll have to flesh out your background a tad before being accepted. Tell a story.

[Killnoob456]

Kk il spend a good hour on revising my background to your liking

[geckosquid]

Just write however much you feel is required for us to get a good feel of your character.

[Killnoob456]

Lol srry wrote that a bit rushed dident at all mean too come off rude I just now realized how aggressive that sounded.. Srry

[Saera]

It's getting better but it could do with a bit more details. I'm sure there's more to his life than betraying and being banished to another land. Maybe tell a little more about the land he's from. Also do indicated sort of where he was banished to (ie. to the far east in an unknown land or something) just to show how you arrive on Kiwike.

Other than that, everything else is good.

And your skin display is fixed.

[Killnoob456]

K I updated my characters background story and hope it has enough details in order to be accepted, btw what's the server Id? And could someone tell me when I'm whitelisted?

[Saera]

The story is vastly improved now. IP is mc.kiwike.se

Welcome to Kiwike.