Application - Goregon23

goregon23 · 04-04-2012, 01:06,

(04-03-2012, 23:43)Saera Wrote:
(04-03-2012, 21:44)TheCreator Wrote: Ah, you silly moose you.

What chu talking about you silly goose.

Also, I still see the mention of Kiwike and Huo Ling in your backstory. Unless the forum is derp and did not show me any changes.

Post is updated

Saera · 04-04-2012, 02:34,

Hmmm I was hoping for a little more flesh in the story. Can you add how he discovered Kiwike? He travelled to the new land or something?

goregon23 · 04-04-2012, 18:32,

(04-04-2012, 02:34)Saera Wrote: Hmmm I was hoping for a little more flesh in the story. Can you add how he discovered Kiwike? He travelled to the new land or something?

Post updated. If this dont get me in, I give up.

Saera · (This post was last modified: 04-04-2012, 19:52 by Saera.)

But you didn't give up, and now you've pushed your creativity even further.

Very good and detailed background story, and touching at the end. And you included how you come to Kiwike.

I'm proud of you son. At least we know now that you put a lot of effort into your backstory.

Welcome to Kiwike.

Also, if you haven't already, please post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...ry13972356 as well