Eroock's application

[Eroock]

Minecraft Username: Eroock
Previous RP experiences: All of kiwike since november of 2010 and had my own
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: yes i had my own and could not afford it
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: Fighting rp and the great community
How did you hear about Kiwike: long time ago

Character Info

Character Name: Sir Eroock III
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Orraku Fields
Gender: Male
Age: 169

General Background Information:
Eroock is an old farmer that was involved in some type of genetically altering farming process. this caused him to be able to live for ever and randomly teleport(Had no control over it). He is not on kiwike looking for a way home

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character):
Eroock is a old style farmer that wears dark colored clothing. He is generally muscular and can fight off any attackers

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?:
Since on kiwike Eroock has not teleported once(in 60 years)he is soon to be starting on building an under ground lab/farm to reinfect himself with this genetically altering disease. he hopes it wil successfully send him back to the mail land

Picture of your minecraft skin:



Quote: When live gives you genetically altering disease's, Try to get more
General
I have played in this community before and cant wait to do it again

[Leech]

So, your character teleported to Kiwike and is trying to get home? It was rathe unclear in your app. You've got something going, though

[Saera]

I agree, but I'd like to see more details in your background story. For example, what is this "genetically altering farming process", how did it affect him (chemical spill, exposure, etc.). I'm hoping for a more beefed up story, as well as how his character got into Kiwike (I assumed its by random teleportation?)

Also, don't forget to post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...ry13972356.

[theonedoctor]

well what i am getting is that he is gonna leave Kiwike.se eventually. So that does not look good. I recomend that you change it so then he WANTED to go back home but likes it here because there is no evil scientist who use him as a test dummy or because there are preaty flowers! which ever one you like but yea add something to it