Application - WayneCampbell

[Aether]

Minecraft Name: WayneCampbell
Previous RP experiences: LordoftheCraft, Dungeons and Dragons
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: Yes, and because they no longer held my interest
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: City raids
How did you hear about Kiwike: A friend had told me about it

Character

Character Name: Aether
Spawn Location: Khulu Desert
Gender: Male
Age: 23

General Background Information: On Aether's original planet, he was a sophisticated scholar and architect, graduating from college at the age of 16. Joining the work force, he found himself working in a new mining project, to create an underground refuge city if anything were to happen to the above ground, crumbling city. After catching many worker's eyes with his stone pillars and buildings, he was promoted as the Leading architect to the city. With his ideas, he turned an empty underground cave into a prestigious city known by all Dwarves, near and far. After over-building the underground city, Aether and a few other Dwarves constructed a spaceship to find a new land for their clan. After some time in the depths of space, Aether lost control of his ship, causing it to spiral into a black hole. When Aether woke up, he found himself, on the floor, his ship crashed, and all other members dead. He gathered what materials he could, and began a new life on the planet.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): My character is a brown haired, bearded dwarf, with two leather sashes, black pants, and fur boots

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: My character's main objective is to join a military, own a home, and fit into the new world he resides in

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
http://imgur.com/Rnwys

[Saera]

This story could make use with a slight improvement. I can see it as being a good one if you work a little more on it to flesh out the story.

[Aether]

Alright, is this better?

[Saera]

Much much better

Welcome to Kiwike.