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06-30-2012, 22:08,
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whitelist aplication-jdesarno
General

Minecraft Name: Jdesarno
Previous RP experiences: skyrim, a few minecraft role playing servers adding up to a few months of experince
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: yes i have it was called altera or hollowworld i left because i lost intrest in it
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?:im most intrested that its a whole roleplaying server all the other servers were pvp and faction based
How did you hear about Kiwike: your steam comunity page it was my last resort after i tried google youtube and mc server lists.

Character

Character Name: Chuck Stormbringer
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Orraku Fields
Gender: male
Age: 25 (not telling the actuall age of rp's sake ;3)

General Background Information:
Chuck born in altera (a distant realm) on a harsh winter wih no brothers or sisters he never knew his father only to know his name and that he died a war hero and thought to live up to his cause he was a craftsman when he was 10 working for a neighbor in his town of witchesbrew helping out the residents there he was known as a nice person in that town.

when he hit 18 he left his home and went to join the templars a race said to purge all evil he was stuck being a doctor on the lines and sometimes with raids charging in with his fellow templars one day in the field he was assigned with higher officers to clear a cave of necromancers to retrive a artifact the cave was full of undead and necromancers slowly taking out the group but chuck snuck past them took the artifact and got out. Hiding behind a boulder he took out the artifact which was a suit of armor seeing that his armor was about to break open he puts it on the inside was enchanted spikes stabbing his head heart and gut as he falls to his death but the next day he wakes up wondering what happened he went back to the templars and explained that he did not die some of them afraid of him running from the sight of him covered in blood he removes his platebody to see that it was hollow nothing inside at all. Chuck thinks to himself *what is this ...* realising he is bound to this relic he continues to serve for 10 more years in secret not revealing to anyone that he was dead.

On Chuck's graduation he was nervous because they would ask him to remove his armor *I have no choice...* he thought to himself but something rang in his mind.. other people... diffrent emotions...personalitys..but hidden away in his mind. He sighs as he gets lead into the courtyard with his officers onto the setup stage for distributing the medals as he walks to get his a arrow goes into his chest he falls to the ground silent everyone was shocked.*what the heck..* one officer says as he removes his platebody showing that he was hollow some of them gasped others looked away in fear.*What the... he's hollow!* one of them says as he walks up to chuck another officer says *how did this happen...* they carry him strugling inside and lay him onto a bed as he slowly drifts off into his mind in everlasting thought.

One day the organization gets beseiged by a orc army overwhelmed they had no choice but to retreat into hiding but chuck was kidnapped waking up slowly as they carried him to thier camp he says as he slowly wakes up *where..are you..taking me..* as he yawns slowly opening his eyes to see his captors. one of them says agressivly *you are ours now!* chuck goes silent for a second then says *okay...im willing to help if you wish* all of the orcs carrying him laugh *oh.. we need lots of help..* one of them say as he grins at chuck .he looks at him with a odd look later arriving at the warcamp they did cruel experiments on him realizing that he could not die, they also slaved him to cutwood cook and tend for the wounded seeing that he was also a doctor.One day they sent him along with the orcs on raiding partys having no choice but to obey he unwillingly helped them pillage and ransack small towns only helping by carrying the loot back not killing anyone.

2 years pass after this they finally decide to let him go seeing that they worn him down from his soul to his body *your free to go* one of them says with a smile on his face seeing all the labor he did Chuck replys *great to help...* as he slowly walks off. one of the orcs say *wait!* chuck turns around *hmm?* he says curiously *our chief! he wants to speak!* as he walks up to chuck *okay..* as they both walk towards the main camp the chief grins as he sees him *good.. good..* he says with a smile on his face as he signals his orc mages to surround him *you done us a great favor.. now we are going to help you..* chuck says *what?.* curiously. he signals his mages to begin as they teleport him off *have a nice life..* he laughs as chuck slowly fades into nothing chuck slowly mumbles * i wonder...whats happening..* as he gets teleported off into nowhere (this is where our new story begins..)

5 more years pass as chuck drifts in thought thinking about his father.. altera.. the templars. Chuck does not notice but a small hole is begining to tear in front of him he looks and sees its another realm.Chuck pushes his way slowly into this new realm. :O

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): well.. Chuck is 6'9 towering over most people he is shy and timid towards people overprotective towards people he cares about also and he has multiple personalites harbored in himself a few are awoken some are not.Anger and depression are awoken he is trying to help as many people as he can to combat it. He is a relic of the past ...litearly (read the story you will understand) so he is just one big worndown living armor.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: to live life to its fullest to make someone happy in life and to find out what happened to him and why

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
[Image: YOURNAME.png] http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4fe...4314443208 sorry made it handmade :/
07-01-2012, 03:32,
Post: #2
RE: whitelist aplication-jdesarno
Very nicely done. Though the run on sentences seem a bit distracting but that doesn't matter too much.

Last thing to do is Post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...d__st__180 and you shall be whitelisted.

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07-01-2012, 03:40,
Post: #3
RE: whitelist aplication-jdesarno
much obliged for your comment and its done
07-01-2012, 03:40, (This post was last modified: 07-01-2012, 03:41 by jdesarno.)
Post: #4
RE: whitelist aplication-jdesarno
you will not be dissapointed Smiley
07-01-2012, 03:42,
Post: #5
RE: whitelist aplication-jdesarno
Welcome to Kiwike. Glad to have another keen rp-er along in the server.

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