Application - Crashlander04 (Fixed)

[Crashlander04]

General What do I put here? (I'm not getting rid of this part, its got my scent so its mother will never take it back now)

Minecraft Name: Crashlander04
Previous RP experiences: Runescape, Kiwike 2.0, Actual MCRP servers, Skyrim.
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: My friend hosted a server once and it failed in two or three weeks. Also, I'm technically still staff on a failing Fallout-themed server.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: Revamped being done (is actually a feature, aka completion) but for tristo's sake I'll say the amazing staff.
How did you hear about Kiwike: Two fubs in my grade were talkin with some other guy about it after exams. Monkeybum, Afromaster, Lardmonkey.. ring a bell?

Character More title-y section things. yay.
[Spawn] - Khulu Desert
Character Name: Ronguor
Gender: Male
Age: 250

General Background Information: After the Sunbeard stronghold he called home was overthrown by its interim-leader, Ronguor, his kin, and those who were loyal to the true king of the Sunbeards, were forced to flee their legendary dwelling. For many years the band of refugees lived in peace, but very much ruing the day they would reclaim their kingdom. Eventually, their refuge village was discovered by a band of guards loyal to the unrightfully empowered king. The next night the village was burned down in an ambush while the army of the Sunbeards slaughtered its inhabitants. Luckily enough, Ronguor managed to wake his two younger brothers in time to escape the massacre. The three then lived the next one-hundred years wandering the lands of the world, exploring many nations and defining themselves as hardy travellers. After many an exquisite adventure, the three decided to calm down their lives and take rest in a new land.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): A dwarf. A hearty, dark-eyed, iron-helmed dwarf. No shirt, just a broad, muscular physique (similar to certain admins I must assume). A robust roan beard covering the most of his chest.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: To redeem the Sunbeards as the glorious ancestors of their past, and to re-obtain the splendour and magnitude to which they lived as lords of that once-great kingdom.

Picture of your minecraft skin:

[Crazylol5]

General What do I put here?

Minecraft Name: Crashlander04
Previous RP experiences: Runescape, Kiwike 2.0, Actual MCRP servers, Skyrim.
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: My friend hosted a server once and it failed in two or three weeks. Also, I'm technically still staff on a failing Fallout-themed server.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: Revamped being done.
How did you hear about Kiwike: Two fags in my grade were talkin with some other guy about it after exams.

Character

Character Name: Ronguor
Gender: Male
Age: 250 on the dot yo.

General Background Information: He farted back in his home nation and it got really awkward.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): A dwarf.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: Tits or gtfo.

Picture of your minecraft skin:
(twas using this for Fallout/technic server temporarily, not my actual skin)

Hurr durr master troll XDDDDDDDDD

No but seriously, this is retarded.

[tristo999]

Please dont take this lightly. We dont want to have our time wasted reading these applications.

[Crashlander04]

Could I at least get some criticism or recommendations on what I should fix?

[tristo999]

What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: Revamped being done. -not a feature
How did you hear about Kiwike: Two fags - language



General Background Information: He farted back in his home nation and it got really awkward. No nations on the world, and also just not right.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): A dwarf. -Put what he wears, Looks like, and physical elements. Many people have different views on A Dwarf

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: Tits or gtfo. -Not good at all.

[Sebiale]

Could I at least get some criticism or recommendations on what I should fix?

If you've read the example then you should already have an idea what's wrong.

[Android]

I don't think I'd want to help Crash fix his application if he's going to be like this the whole time.

[sethd13]

:lol:

[Crashlander04]

I don't think I'd want to help Droid get girls if he's going to be like this the whole time.

[sethd13]

That's disrespectful,especially at a time where he is weighing in on your application acceptance...