Application- Thornax

[thornax]

General

Minecraft Name:
Thornax
Previous RP experiences:
Kiwike 2.0
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?:
No really significant servers.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?:
RP!
How did you hear about Kiwike:
Squiggley1
Character

Character Name:
Thornax
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle):
Orraku Fields
Gender:
Male
Age:
23

General Background Information:
Thornax, A warder from Two Rivers, is on a mission to map out the world, and discover the secrets that this new land has to offer. He set off from his homeland of Two Rivers when the town was attacked by a raving band of Orcs. Up until this point Two Rivers had never seen any trouble. Just a smithing town where merchants would come once a year bringing trinkets. Than one night, the Midsummers eve Festival, they came...
No one know they were coming because of the party. People just assumed that some people were getting a bit rowdy. Little did they know they were being attacked right Under their noses.
Thornax lost that fight. He was knocked out after 3 minutes, But a warder, by the name of Jack, saved him. The warers had always been secretive folk, with their cloaks that always seemed to let them disappear, and their longbows that never seemed to miss. He taught thornax the ways of warding. and told him to go out into the world. Keep the Two Rivers folk alive. So that no one raid can snuff them out.
and so he went. Roaming for days and days, low on food and water, till he found the land of Kiwike. He was nursed back to health by a Malfunctioning Iron golem. When he was finally ready to go, he set out onto what he knew would be a great adventure.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character):
Thornax is a rather tall, and skinny man with very strong legs. He wears his chainmaille armor, even though it has been torn, and His leathers that he recieved from his father back in Two Rivers.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?:
Thornax wants to map out all of Kiwike. and is a roamer. He sells food and leathers to travelers and is plainly just looking for an adventure
Picture of your minecraft skin:

[Naamandre3]

You're general background information is way to little.
He's 23 when he arrived on kiwike which indicates he had been roaming for awhile. were did he get the chainmail armor torn? What skills does he have. does he have enemies that follow him?
A home a family? etc etc.

More detail is needed

[thornax]

Tried adding more detail =D

[Naamandre3]

Better, enough to satisfy me.
See yourself as whitelisted.

Welcome to kiwike!