Application - GoldenSurfer

[GoldenSurfer]

Minecraft Name:GoldenSurfer
Previous RP experiences: Kiwike, Kiwike 2.0
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: all the others are boring
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: Territories
How did you hear about Kiwike: My friend RedRover

Character

Character Name: Syb
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Orakku Fields
Gender: Male
Age: 13

General Background Information: GoldenSurfer was a little robot. A Crazy but nice guy build this awsome robot his name is Lord Bob.He was build for a couple reasons: His first mission was building a nice community in a village so i searched for i nice place and did build a nice town. the people liked that town and joined. First mission done
His second mission is bring peace in the world. he talked to every body and told then joke's. sold problems out. its now peace. complete 2
the third mission is make with new friends a nice house. so i did it with new friends. complete 3
the fourth mission is make a nation with other friendly towns.
He want to begin with hes list but he must find a new world. he was a couple weeks exploring for a new world. Then he found this world named kiwike.
he was total happy if he can come there. Thats the Question that i can't answer

Physical Condition/Description A metalic dutch robot with a evil meter and a battery on his back of his head. he can suck all types of blocks in his big mouth. The Dutch robot

What is your character's main objective? He wants to build a hole community and live with lots of friends in a nice town. In Peace

Picture of your minecraft skin:

[Saera]

Hmm I was hoping for a little more regarding the background. If possible, who built him? The purposes he has seems fair enough.

Just edit your post here. No need for a new thread.

[GoldenSurfer]

Thnx finaly
thank you

[Naamandre3]

We are getting there.

Now this is looking better but.
You need to rewrite the background and the way i want you to do that is.
make a story out of it don't sum it up with numbers one to four.
Make it like.. a small story?

[GoldenSurfer]

okey can i make it here?

[Naamandre3]

Jup, just edit you're first post