Application - Stealthy101 (Edited

[Stealthy101]

General

Minecraft Name:Stealthy101
Previous RP experiences: Minimal RP on minecraft, sadly . However, I thoroughly enjoy it, and have played games with an RPG Style before.
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: Played on Battlecraft, a completely PvP server. Left because although I massively enjoy PvP, I do also enjoy building.
Also played on a couple of prison servers, which I left for no reason in particular. I still go on one of them from time to time.
Many others which I've played on I left because they didn't seem to live up to their RPG description.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: The combination of towns and PvP at the same time. Very few servers I've seen manage to pull this off well, but from what I've seen so far as a spirit and read on the forums, this server manages it nicely.
How did you hear about Kiwike: Looking through some of the higher-rated servers on minestatus.net

Character

Character Name: An'ar
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Orraku Fields
Gender: Male
Age: 19

General Background Information: An'ar is the son of unknown parents. He was found one day, lying in a roughly-woven basket, outside a small village, and was taken in. Though the family that took him in did their best to care for him, it was soon made obvious that he didn't fit in. As he matured, he became obsessed with his parentage, and spent week after week researching from books and interrogating the elders. Then, one day, his village was raided by bandits. Still young, and completely bewildered and terrified, he hid himself in the house. Later, after all the screams and cries of the helpless village people had completely died down, he emerged, only to find that half the villagers had been killed outright, even those who didn't raise a hand against the invaders. The majority of the rest had been taken as slaves. After burying his foster parents, he departed from the village. Instilled with both a determination to help those who suffer, and to take revenge on all those who would make these people suffer, he has made himself ready, both physically and mentally, for the challenge of finding his parents, and for removing all those wrongdoers who would prevent him from doing so. After travelling almost aimlessly for months, he entered the land of Kiwiki. The place seemed to rejuvenate him, and he felt elated just upon entering - the mere aura of the land seemed to imbibe him with a feeling of vigour. With renewed hope, he now seeks to end his internal torment by discovering the truth of his ancestry.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character):
He is of stocky build - not particularly short, but definitely not tall. Mildly scarred face. Tougher than he first appears, though not strong. He dresses generally in black robes, with his hood pulled down, in an attempt to go about his business quietly, without drawing the attention of others.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: An'ar wishes to discover the truth of his origins. To accomplish this, he wants to build himself up some degree of wealth and power, with which to help him further his goals. Sorry, not so good with images. However, I believe that the link I provided works.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
Sorry, not so good with images. However, I believe that the link I provided works.

[Saera]

You show your skin display with http://kiwike.se/skin.php/Stealthy101, with [IMG] before and [/IMG] after that url.

Your story is well written. However, there is just one part missing. You said that half the villagers were murdered and most of them enslaved. What about your character? Did he somehow remained undetected? And when they left, then he came out of hiding to bury his parents?

Just want to be sure you include those details in there.

Also, do tell how your character found his way to the land of Kiwike.

[Saera]

Good good.

Welcome to Kiwike.