(04-07-2012, 13:42)MainDigger Wrote: Fixed the skin for you. Also, it seems you forgot to write General Background Information.
General Background Information: Was borned in a small poor cottage. At age of 10 he started hunting animals, as a hobbie and his parents saw potential in him so they sent him into a military force. After a few years being a runner in military he got promoted. When he went to the war he saw so much death and misery he couldnt handle it so he left the military. Before he had a chance to go home he was offered by strange man, if he wants to join an assassins league. Wulfgar accepted the offer. When he finally arrived home his home had been burned down with his parents in it, but there was a letter saying *thats for leaving military*. He realised it was made by a military officer. Wulfgar traveled a long trip back to the military and killed the officer in everybodys eyes. He was sent in prison for a lifetime but the strange man saved him.
From that day Wulfgar started assassinate and living on the edge
(I made the story 3rd person if thats okey)