Application - Deeox2

[Deeox2]

General

Minecraft Name:Deeox2
Previous RP experiences:I've been on many MCRP servers.
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?:I left because they were somewhat boring, wasn't really interesting.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?:I want to be a leader, It's what I strive for in all servers, so, the towns,cities and empires element.
How did you hear about Kiwike:I saw the MC Forum's post.

Character

Character Name: Connor Tanther
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle):Aridian Jungle
Gender:Male
Age:21

General Background Information:
Connor's father was a natural leader. He led the small village in which Connor lived.
Connor's father always told him. "Some are born great, others achieve greatness." Connor didn't understand at the time, but he grew to know. The village he lives in was in a tundra, . Two months after Connor had turned 21, a spark had somehow found it's way to the village, and lit one of the four houses on fire. Everyone was asleep, except Connor, who was sitting in a chair outside his family's home. He caught a whiff of the smoke and paniced, the only instances of fire was the campfire inside the circle of houses but-- That fire was still burning, but the smoke smell was stronger then usual. In a deluded rush, he bolted from the chair and ran into the snowy forest.

After having been in the forest for ages, he finally emerged in Kiwike, there was no where else to go.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character):He has a rough leather armour suit, with snowy white fur coming out of the outter parts of the armour. His face is handsome, with blue eyes, white skinned. Upon his head is brown hair.
(Now that I think of it, his backstory doesn't seem to make sense why he'd wear armour, but I guess the Tundra is a dangerous place, so maybe.)

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: He wants to be like his father, a leader, and like his father's saying, great.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):

[Saera]

What I find more confusing is him bolting away instead of alerting his fellow villagers and family. Just my thought. Its up to you if you want to change that or keep it. Other than that the story seems good.

Also, the thread title should be "application - Deeox2"

When you are done editing, post a reply on the thread.

[Deeox2]

Reply?

I added deluded before rush.

[Saera]

Lol ok then.

Welcome to Kiwike.

Also don't forget to post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...ry13972356 if you haven't already.