Application- gearsfan

gearsfan · (This post was last modified: 04-08-2012, 12:56 by Naamandre3.)

General

Minecraft Name:gearsfan
Previous RP experiences:skyrim, fallout, WOW
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?:yes, because my friend
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?:territories
How did you hear about Kiwike:my friend, TheGreatNut

Character

Character Name: Nik Ghaz
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle):Icenfjord
Gender:male
Age:14

General Background Information: he is from the land of the eastern tribe, brother of nut wolfbane. he followed his brother to the land of kiwike to spread the ways of the tribe. he is one of the strongest members of "the fearless", a very well-known/feared assassin organization. he is a cold hearted killer, and never passes up a fight.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): he is a well built, strong individual

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?:wants to follow his older brother in spreading the ways of the tribe

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
[Image: gearsfan.png]

Naamandre3 · 04-08-2012, 12:58,

Fixed the picture for you.

The background is to short and needs to be expended why does the father of a wild eastern clan send his 14 year old son together with his older son towards a strange land? And ontop of that it seems a little strange that a 14 year old is one of the strongest members of a well known assasin organization. (I also want you to take in consideration that the organization might not be famous in kiwike)

You're description also needs some work. Explain some his clothing what pants what shirt, a mask or not? a hood or not? does it have tribal markings and if so what do they mean?

And i would like you to expand you're objective with some goal for himself aswell. Helping his brother seems like a noble goal but he has to have a reason why does it for himself? Wealth? fame? reconision amongst the tribe or from his elderly brother?