Application - Jimatos

[Jimatos]

General

Minecraft Name: Jimatos
Previous RP experiences:I have been playing rp games like Legend Of The Five Rings and Warhammer 40K Deathwatch with RP games team
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?:I have played on a wide verriety of servers like redstone, creative , survival and PVP and the reason i would leave is due to imature kids playing there and pising me off(sorry for the bad langueage use it that often)
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?:I am mostly interested in the RP
How did you hear about Kiwike:I heard about the server throught your post in the minecraft forums

Character

Character Name: Kakita Zaraki
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Khulu Desert
Gender: Male
Age: 25

General Background Information:Kakita Zaraki comes from a long line of archers so he was trained in archery from an young age.At 12 he had already first place in many championships and also learned more martial arts like sword fighting etc and also gotten recognition's there too. At 20 his parents were killed by a mysterious illness being feared to have had the illness and that it was contiguous he was exiled from his home world . After searching for a place to settle down he found kiwike.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): Kakita is an archer. He always carieds hi bow and quiver with him . He wears a green shirt and a brown pants underneeth his leather armor

What is your character's main objective?What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: My characters main objective is to explore and fight monsters and to became one off the best archers in kiwike
Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):

[Leech]

You're going to need to extend your general background information if you want to be accepted. Why was Kakita trained in archery? What do you mean by "find his place in existence"? What brought him to Kiwike (assuming you were born in a different land)?

[Jimatos]

You're going to need to extend your general background information if you want to be accepted. Why was Kakita trained in archery? What do you mean by "find his place in existence"? What brought him to Kiwike (assuming you were born in a different land)?

I've updated my application .Hope it's better now that I've rewritten the background info

[theonedoctor]

Ill be honest bring more of an eye catcher. Like why he left his country and what his motivations are for doing anything. And maybe add a little more about ancestry because the culture there is most likely interested in their ancestry

[Leech]

Better. Whitelisters, take another look at this app, I think it's acceptable. Also, you'll need to post your app on the Minecraft Forums post: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...d__st__140

[Jimatos]

Better. Whitelisters, take another look at this app, I think it's acceptable. Also, you'll need to post your app on the Minecraft Forums post: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...d__st__140

Thanks Leech

[DjFuzz]

Someone already has that skin

Any chance of changing it :c

[Saera]

Alright. Welcome to Kiwike.