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Application True3vyl
06-22-2012, 00:44, (This post was last modified: 06-30-2012, 17:48 by True3vyl.)
Post: #1
Application True3vyl
General

Minecraft Name: True3vyl
Previous RP experiences:
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: Yes, MRKD RP Server. I left as It shut down.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: Playing with some friends
How did you hear about Kiwike: Borntorule

Character

Character Name: Nivakiin
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Icenfjord
Gender: Male
Age: 17

General Background Information: Disfigured by an ancient enchantmend, brought on by the "accidental" explosion of an enchantment room. Nivakiin now wanders the worlds with his friend/leader Oblaankiin, speaking little, but working hard towards the success of his mission.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): Due to the nature of his enchantment, he now walks as a human, sounds as a...sort of human, but has the body and appitite of a cow. Wears a snazzy suit that he "borrowed" from one of his adventures.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: To get the curse lifted off of him once and for all.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
[Image: True3vyl.png]
06-22-2012, 01:51,
Post: #2
RE: Application True3vyl
Nice app, but you may need to expand on your goals

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06-22-2012, 03:17,
Post: #3
RE: Application True3vyl
Ok, Edited it.
06-22-2012, 05:24,
Post: #4
RE: Application True3vyl
Perhaps a more defined goal would work, for example, "He hopes to find the cure to this enchantment, to be human once more". Your story is a little bit lacking as well. And what is this "mission" he is involved with?

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06-22-2012, 20:58,
Post: #5
RE: Application True3vyl
(06-22-2012, 05:24)Saera Wrote: And what is this "mission" he is involved with?
I'm guessing it's cow stuff. Top secret cow stuff.

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06-22-2012, 22:14,
Post: #6
RE: Application True3vyl
(06-22-2012, 20:58)chaz03088 Wrote:
(06-22-2012, 05:24)Saera Wrote: And what is this "mission" he is involved with?
I'm guessing it's cow stuff. Top secret cow stuff.

Yeah. It is. I'd rather have my backstory be told in game rather than here.
06-22-2012, 22:55,
Post: #7
RE: Application True3vyl
If it's any help, I can vouch for 3v.
06-23-2012, 17:30,
Post: #8
RE: Application True3vyl
If that is the case, I suggest rewording your objective a little like how I suggested earlier and then you will be good to go.

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06-23-2012, 19:05,
Post: #9
RE: Application True3vyl
(06-22-2012, 22:55)borntorule Wrote: If it's any help, I can vouch for 3v.

Nope wont help
06-23-2012, 21:29,
Post: #10
RE: Application True3vyl
Yay, Kiwike has its own Pinnochio :3


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