Applications-GoldenAge13

[GoldenAge13]

General

Minecraft Name: GoldenAge13
Previous RP experiences: none
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: I have not played in any other servers
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: territories
How did you hear about Kiwike: a friend

Character

Character Name: Golden
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): aridian jungle
Gender: male
Age: 32

General Background Information: Golden lived at a town where everyone had gotten sick, and we're constantly attacked by poison spiders. Golden had always thought that the spiders was the main source of the sickness, so he set out to find a cure. He found out a cure, but never shared it with anyone. he also found some potions that increased health, and had made many to cure his fellow town members. He did not stop there, he decided to harness the poison of the spiders and use it against them. After he helped his town, he embarked on a journey and found the island known as kiwike. He came upon a jungle, and decided to stay there for the night.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character) Golden is a medic who aids to his fellow citizens. he wears a red shirt with the medic symbol, so he is easier to identify. he also carries pouch to hold all of his potions.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: his main objective is to find more potion recipes and use them to his advantage.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):

[partyars]

Your story seems a bit flat to me, try to add more to it, flesh it out a bit.

Your main objective is really simple, there's nothing wrong with that but is that the only thing you want to do with your character? Perhaps add something in the likes of helping people because you're a medic after all.

Your skin description also seems a bit more like a skin used in a different timestamp, This world is settled in a medieval/steampunk era, maybe try to adapt your skin to this or add an explanation to why your character wears a modern red shirt. And the description doesn't fit the given skin as well (no red shirt)


and one more thing I found: Kiwike isn't an island, it's more like a land or a world.

[sethd13]

Most rp stories should have a goal that is a reason to interact with the community.

[aloha]

Applications-GoldenAge13
General

Minecraft Name: GoldenAge13
Previous RP experiences: none
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: I have not played in any other servers
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: territories
How did you hear about Kiwike: a friend

Character

Character Name: Golden
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): aridian jungle
Gender: male
Age: 32

General Background Information: Golden lived at a town where everyone had gotten sick, and we're constantly attacked by poison spiders. His mother had actually died from the sickness. Golden had always thought that the spiders was the main source of the sickness, so he set out to find a cure. He had thought to himself that he would never stop, until he could honor her mother and what she has done for him. He found out a cure, but never shared it with anyone because he feared that it would be used for evil some how. he also found some potions that increased health, and had made many to cure his fellow town members. He did not stop there, he decided to harness the poison of the spiders and use it against them. After he helped his town, he embarked on a journey and found the great known as kiwike. He came upon a jungle, and decided to stay there for the night.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character) Golden is a medic who aids to his fellow citizens. he wears a white shirt with suspenders, and a red tie. He was actually one of the first to invent the tie and suspenders, because he was also a little bit creative. His red gloves are stained from the bloods of the patients that he has taken care of. He also carries a bag connected to his suspenders.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: his main objective is to find more potion recipes and use them to his advantage. He also wishes to find another nation and help cure the sickness of them. Then he will offer his services to the whole world.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):

my other friend is also having technical difficulties

[aloha]

Applications-GoldenAge13
General

Minecraft Name: GoldenAge13
Previous RP experiences: none
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: I have not played in any other servers
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: territories
How did you hear about Kiwike: a friend

Character

Character Name: Golden
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): aridian jungle
Gender: male
Age: 32

General Background Information: Golden lived at a town where everyone had gotten sick, and we're constantly attacked by poison spiders. His mother had actually died from the sickness. Golden had always thought that the spiders was the main source of the sickness, so he set out to find a cure. He had thought to himself that he would never stop, until he could honor her mother and what she has done for him. He found out a cure, but never shared it with anyone because he feared that it would be used for evil some how. he also found some potions that increased health, and had made many to cure his fellow town members. He did not stop there, he decided to harness the poison of the spiders and use it against them. After he helped his town, he embarked on a journey and found the great known as kiwike. He came upon a jungle, and decided to stay there for the night.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character) Golden is a medic who aids to his fellow citizens. he wears a white shirt with suspenders, and a red tie. He was actually one of the first to invent the tie and suspenders, because he was also a little bit creative. His red gloves are stained from the bloods of the patients that he has taken care of. He also carries a bag connected to his suspenders.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: his main objective is to find more potion recipes and use them to his advantage. He also wishes to find another nation and help cure the sickness of them. Then he will offer his services to the whole world.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):

my other friend is also having technical difficulties

[Saera]

Welcome to Kiwike.