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Application - RazorDude
10-04-2012, 18:07, (This post was last modified: 10-05-2012, 18:58 by RazorDude.)
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General

Minecraft Name: RazorDude
Previous RP experiences: Minecraft servers, mmo's such as guild wars and world of warcraft.
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: I used to play on a minecraft rp server that was great but the admins where annoying they kept declaring war and godmode killing everyone, so i quit.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: Roleplay
How did you hear about Kiwike: Found on the minecraft forums

Character

Character Name: Raz or Razor
Spawn Location: Orraku Fields
Gender: Male
Age: 23

General Background Information: Razor was just a normal guy from a small town just until a short while ago , he was wrongly accused by the town guards of stealing from the towns fruit stall, Razor knows that he was set up so he ran away before the guards could catch him (one of Razor's special ability's is being able to run very fast) Razor's mother died giving birth to him and his father is dead so he had nothing to leave behind when he ran away from his hometown.

Razor has walked almost a hundred miles across what seemed like a never ending dessert , where he could find a new life or could die. Just as Razor thought he was going to die of thirst he saw some shadowy figures in the distance and then he collapsed. When Razor woke up he saw two happy faces and they told him that he had almost died and asked him questions. But Razor did not tell them what he was doing or how he got here, This was the start of his new life. Razor thought that he would be able to live in the town but they told him there was no space. So they told him about a land called Kiwiki. Razor travelled far and wide until he found these lands and now that he has arrived, his story begins.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): Long yellow hair, wears a cloak , young , fast and strong
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What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: To find the Man/Woman who set him up and got him kicked out of his hometown and why they did it.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
[Image: RazorDude.png]
10-04-2012, 18:22,
Post: #2
RE: Application - RazorDude
I'm not a mod or anything, but try formatting it better, everything italic and underlined hurts my eyes.

10-04-2012, 18:48,
Post: #3
RE: Application - RazorDude
I agree. Also, it couldn't hurt to do a spell check. Just a suggestion.

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10-04-2012, 19:03,
Post: #4
RE: Application - RazorDude
(10-04-2012, 18:48)AssassinMan98 Wrote: I agree. Also, it couldn't hurt to do a spell check. Just a suggestion.

Sorry i'm bad at spelling. I tried to run a spell-check on a website but it could not find any.. T.T
10-04-2012, 19:10,
Post: #5
RE: Application - RazorDude
Looks good, I'll see what I can do to attract a whitelister's attention

Leech: Moderating the wiki for over 75 years
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10-04-2012, 21:03,
Post: #6
RE: Application - RazorDude
(10-04-2012, 19:10)Leech Wrote: Looks good, I'll see what I can do to attract a whitelister's attention

Thank you Smiley
10-05-2012, 03:37, (This post was last modified: 10-05-2012, 03:37 by theonedoctor.)
Post: #7
RE: Application - RazorDude
ehhhh not much of a story and at some parts seems very childish.
10-05-2012, 04:36,
Post: #8
RE: Application - RazorDude
Poker face You're such a critic... xD Ok, well, welcome to Kiwike! I'm sure you'll love it here. I have a few questions to ask about your background: 1) How did all of his family die BEFORE He was born? (This one dosen't really affect your chances of acceptance, I sas just curious.) 2) How did he find his way to our wonderful world? I believe the second question needs to be answered before you can be accepted, and all you have to do is just edit the original post. Makes it easy on Mr. Squid, who I will soon be shoving into the whitelisting subforum. Just one last thing I'd like to say before I go, is that we're getting a new wave of players just as the server begins to undergo some serious renovations. Wer're splitting our one server into two, with one focused soley on the joys of roleplaying. So this means that our community may not be active in-game, but the forums are stil very active. While we wait to release new information to everyone, please hop around the forums, get to know some people. We've got a great community here, and it would be awesome if you wanted to be a part of it! So that's it, peace out mah brothas.
10-05-2012, 17:44,
Post: #9
RE: Application - RazorDude
(10-05-2012, 04:36)iDieForEXP Wrote: Poker face You're such a critic... xD Ok, well, welcome to Kiwike! I'm sure you'll love it here. I have a few questions to ask about your background: 1) How did all of his family die BEFORE He was born? (This one dosen't really affect your chances of acceptance, I sas just curious.) 2) How did he find his way to our wonderful world? I believe the second question needs to be answered before you can be accepted, and all you have to do is just edit the original post. Makes it easy on Mr. Squid, who I will soon be shoving into the whitelisting subforum. Just one last thing I'd like to say before I go, is that we're getting a new wave of players just as the server begins to undergo some serious renovations. Wer're splitting our one server into two, with one focused soley on the joys of roleplaying. So this means that our community may not be active in-game, but the forums are stil very active. While we wait to release new information to everyone, please hop around the forums, get to know some people. We've got a great community here, and it would be awesome if you wanted to be a part of it! So that's it, peace out mah brothas.

edited the story. I accidently wrote his family died before he was born anyway *DURP* anyway i cant wait to join :3
10-05-2012, 20:28,
Post: #10
RE: Application - RazorDude
Awesome! Still haven't heard from the gecko or the squid, and so I guess patience :/


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