Application - stealth_ninjia

stealth_ninjia · (This post was last modified: 10-06-2012, 18:40 by stealth_ninjia.)

General

Minecraft Name:stealth_ninjia
Previous RP experiences:Minecraft servers, and other games like tf2 and portal 2
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?:i played on another server but the owner couldnt afford to keep running it Sad

What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?:the roleplay
How did you hear about Kiwike:on the minecraft forums

Character

Character Name:Y'rildar
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle):Orraku Fields
Gender:male
Age:24

General Background Information: Y'rildar was only 12 when his his parents left him for dead when they were on holiday in the south of vollengart, he then had to survive in the city streets for the next 10 years, when one day he met a old man who sold him some old mountain climbing gear, for only 2 silver and 32 copper. so he decides to go climbing into the mountains, and after 3 nights and 2 days he saw a small meadow with some houses in the middle, he walked closer and saw the name of the small village on one side near the edge of the path said this: welcome to the mountain lands of Kiwike.
so this is were Y'rildar starts his new life.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character):healthy, normal size and a little fat, wears black and grey gear, he is young, fast, and strong.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?:find his parents and get revenge on them.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
[Image: stealth_ninjia.png]

iDieForEXP · 10-05-2012, 20:34,

Hey there! Welcome to Kiwike, I'm sure you'll love it here. Some comments on your application; The general background story is a bit short, but that's not the main issue. One of the things that irks the white-listers, is that 85% of the applications we get involve parent deaths. And 60% of that 85% want to seek out the ones who did it and get revenge. Not that your story won't work, it's just that you might want to add more details, imagery, make a story out of it. It'll get the listers' mind off of the cliche. Also I'd like to end by saying that we're getting a new wave of players just as the server begins to undergo some serious renovations. We're splitting our one server into two, with one focused solely on the joys of roleplaying. So this means that our community may not be active in-game, but the forums are still very active. While we wait to release new information to everyone, please hop around the forums, get to know some people. We've got a great community here, and it would be awesome if you wanted to be a part of it!

stealth_ninjia · 10-05-2012, 20:55,

(10-05-2012, 20:34)iDieForEXP Wrote: Hey there! Welcome to Kiwike, I'm sure you'll love it here. Some comments on your application; The general background story is a bit short, but that's not the main issue. One of the things that irks the white-listers, is that 85% of the applications we get involve parent deaths. And 60% of that 85% want to seek out the ones who did it and get revenge. Not that your story won't work, it's just that you might want to add more details, imagery, make a story out of it. It'll get the listers' mind off of the cliche. Also I'd like to end by saying that we're getting a new wave of players just as the server begins to undergo some serious renovations. We're splitting our one server into two, with one focused solely on the joys of roleplaying. So this means that our community may not be active in-game, but the forums are still very active. While we wait to release new information to everyone, please hop around the forums, get to know some people. We've got a great community here, and it would be awesome if you wanted to be a part of it!

hi!
firstly thanks for replying to my post

and thanks as well for the advice about my story line (i will change that), also what does the other half of the server do then?
thanks again

stealth_ninjia

iDieForEXP · 10-05-2012, 23:03,

No problem, I exist to serve Tongue

Well, some people either choose to have grown up here, and others don't really mention their childhood at all in their backstory.

stealth_ninjia · 10-06-2012, 09:06,

ok thanks

AssassinMan98 · 10-06-2012, 17:12,

Only one, miniscule problem I see with the post; Kiwike is a country, not a village. So maybe instead of a sign that says "village" of Kiwike, maybe welcome to "the land" of Kiwike?

stealth_ninjia · 10-06-2012, 18:26,

(10-06-2012, 17:12)AssassinMan98 Wrote: Only one, miniscule problem I see with the post; Kiwike is a country, not a village. So maybe instead of a sign that says "village" of Kiwike, maybe welcome to "the land" of Kiwike?

oh i did't realise sorry.
ill change that right away

thank you
stealth

AssassinMan98 · 10-06-2012, 18:28,

No problem, glad to help

stealth_ninjia · 10-06-2012, 18:33,

(10-06-2012, 18:28)AssassinMan98 Wrote: No problem, glad to help

can't wait to get on the server! im a soul? at the moment and sort of stuck in a cave, because i can't brake blocks, or tp:p
server looks amazing though!
stealth

AssassinMan98 · 10-06-2012, 18:34,

What will happen is, when you get accepted, you will spawn at the place you chose, and you will be a normal player. So don't worry EWBTE