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The return of the high elves and the elde-renist
05-10-2011, 03:41, (This post was last modified: 05-10-2011, 12:32 by andy66252.)
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The return of the high elves and the elde-renist
As time went on the high elves who had moved to the saftey of the far purge began to wonder what was going on in the lands of kiwike. as immortal beings time seemed to be at a stand still for them until they couldn't take not knowing. so the high elves decided to return to our lands. meanwhile the frost elves were moving because they discovered that the renist(lapis lazuli) deposits were running low. these crystals are particulary important to the elves because they use them in spells and as a way to enchant just about anything. the two civilizations stumbled across each other when a young frost elven magician was doing a routine scan of the area.the 2 races decided to hold a meeting to decide what they should do. after a disscussion the 2 councils decided that the races would live together. They eventually came to a place to call home and began to search for renist. while they searched they made an incredible discovery. A crystal that was at least 9 meters in height! they decided to name this great crystal the elde-renist which literally means great crystal. the councils decided to make their civilization safer by enchanting the crystal so that they could make small landmasses float in midair where they'd be safe from invaders(this aspect will have to be ok'ed by yotta but it does fit into the rp quite nicely) the councils met again to find a name for this great place and decided to name it after one of the great places of old Rivendell or the last homely home. (remember the amount of magic put into the crystal is massive and there are wards protecting it from destruction but they may be broken later Wink just a little bit of an rp idea for later) The elves have recently set up a great observatory to keep watch for they have heard news of the darkness spreading over kiwike and when it comes they will be ready.(most of this has yet to be built so if anyone is interested in joining or helping build just pm me and we can works something out) And so is the most recent history of the elves however greater events may yet happen so be on the lookout!(hope you guys like it!)

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05-10-2011, 04:05,
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((Only complaint is poor paragraph structure and grammar, otherwise looks epic! Might not really be that bad as I am looking at it on a phone...

"One can concentrate so closely on the words of a sentence that one thereby misses the meaning. As can happen in any area of life. You must never lose focus on the larger landscape."
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05-10-2011, 12:31,
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((not actually many grammar problems except caps i hate having to do caps and i was in a bit of a rush writing it so yes the grammar may be worse than i thought

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05-10-2011, 12:37,
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Yes. it isss.... Ill re write it =/

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05-10-2011, 12:38,
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((ok whatever dude if you want

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05-10-2011, 12:39,
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XD love you andy!

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05-10-2011, 14:23,
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So many places to go in kiwike! I swear, I'm going to run out of virtual memory on my computer before I visit most of the cool places on this server.

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