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Application - chezzburger21
07-17-2012, 14:28,
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RE: Application - chezzburger21
It feels like the story is a bit lacking, like there is something more you can add to the story. Perhaps you can tell us why did he decide to leave the farm and venture out? Was he tired of being a simple farmer? Does he want to seek revenge?

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RE: Application - chezzburger21 - by sethd13 - 07-16-2012, 18:40
RE: Application - chezzburger21 - by Saera - 07-17-2012, 14:28
RE: Application - chezzburger21 - by Saera - 07-18-2012, 02:24
RE: Application - chezzburger21 - by bvcxzmn - 11-14-2013, 06:15

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