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07-31-2012, 02:02,
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RE: ant97mester123 apply
The story did not seem to flow. There aren't much details regarding the backstory of your character, your objective seems too simple. And your grammar doesn't help overall either.

Please redo your application, read other accepted applications to see what standards we expect.
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ant97mester123 apply - by ant97mester123 - 07-30-2012, 15:34
RE: ant97mester123 apply - by sethd13 - 07-30-2012, 21:00
RE: ant97mester123 apply - by Saera - 07-31-2012, 02:02
RE: ant97mester123 apply - by ant97mester123 - 07-31-2012, 09:26
RE: ant97mester123 apply - by ant97mester123 - 07-31-2012, 21:05
RE: ant97mester123 apply - by Saera - 08-02-2012, 14:31
RE: ant97mester123 apply - by ant97mester123 - 08-05-2012, 12:59
RE: ant97mester123 apply - by Saera - 08-05-2012, 16:37

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