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03-30-2013, 05:49,
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RE: The Bird
This is pretty good. I like it.

A few suggestions:
Nothing big, but I think auto correct or something screwed up a few words at the beggining. Also, I'm not a great poet, but the difference in syllables of ryhming lines sounded choppy. Could be that you were going for that though.

This a school assignment?
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The Bird - by leowester - 03-30-2013, 05:25
RE: The Bird - by tristo999 - 03-30-2013, 05:30
RE: The Bird - by iDieForEXP - 03-30-2013, 05:49

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