Kiwike Application Form

Rawther · 05-03-2012, 02:58,

General

Minecraft Name: Rawther
Previous RP experiences: World of Warcraft
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: Yes, I have played on Zealcraft. I left Zealcraft because they revamped the server and deleted all of my structures, towns, and so forth.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: I am most interested in the role playing aspect of Kiwike.
How did you hear about Kiwike: One of my friends told me about this server.

Character

Character Name: Rawther
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Icenfjord
Gender: Male
Age: 14

General Background Information: Rawther is an old knight from an abandoned wasteland long ago. He inherited his title and set forth on a journey to survive and prosper. On his way he battled many foes and was respected amongst many villages.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): Rawther appears as a black knight with cyan eyes and diamond features. He wears the finest of metals and can navigate easily through terrains of all sorts.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: Rawther's main objective is to take on a new adventure and succeed in his quest for glory. He wishes to experience adventure, excitement, and meet varieties of people.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
[Image: Rawther.png]

Cerce · 05-03-2012, 03:37,

I, personally, think that he would be a great addition. However, I would like to remind you that Kiwike has been Revamped before, and may do so again - if they delete all of your structures, hard work, and even your character and his lore, would you still stay?

Rawther · 05-03-2012, 04:52,

(05-03-2012, 03:37)Cerce Wrote: I, personally, think that he would be a great addition. However, I would like to remind you that Kiwike has been Revamped before, and may do so again - if they delete all of your structures, hard work, and even your character and his lore, would you still stay?

Yes, I would stay because Kiwike is awesome. Another reason I left the other server was because they changed some of their main rules and didn't filter language and inapproriate content.

Saera · 05-03-2012, 07:13,

I can see a story going. But more details might make it quite a read. Maybe a bit more history about this land he comes from, his supposedly inherited title. Also don't forget to include how he found his way to Kiwike. And the age is meant for your character.

And lastly, don't forget to post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...ry13972356 as well.

smellityet · (This post was last modified: 05-03-2012, 16:23 by smellityet.)

If you do need to add "a touch of salt," I would suggest details describing the journey, maybe how the kingdom collapsed, who they met while traveling towards Kiwike. *Cough* Yonny *Cough*

Cerce · 05-03-2012, 13:28,

Honestly, this seems like one of the few cases where less is more. The man is literate, appears as if he knows his own story very well, mature, experienced, and good at picking/making skins.

smellityet · (This post was last modified: 05-03-2012, 16:21 by smellityet.)

(05-03-2012, 13:28)Cerce Wrote: Honestly, this seems like one of the few cases where less is more. The man is literate, appears as if he knows his own story very well, mature, experienced, and good at picking/making skins.

That's very kind of you.

Rawther · 05-03-2012, 16:40,

(05-03-2012, 07:13)Saera Wrote: I can see a story going. But more details might make it quite a read. Maybe a bit more history about this land he comes from, his supposedly inherited title. Also don't forget to include how he found his way to Kiwike. And the age is meant for your character.

And lastly, don't forget to post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...ry13972356 as well.

Here is Rawther's full story
Rawther was a villager, a young boy in that matter. He always dreamed of warding off dragons and earning the best of titles. One day, in his small village, Woodsvilla, a dragon appeared at the edge of the mist and razed most of the city. People fled and were crying for help, but the Knights of Glory didn't come to their aid. Rawther grabbed his father's longsword from inside his home and charged out screaming at the firebreathing dragon. The dragon's attention directed at Rawther and spit acidic flames at him. He jumped out of the way and with one timed shot he threw the sword into the dragon. The terror of the skies was defeated and the Knights of Glory arrived. They declared Rawther as a new knight. He was very young, but his skills were far passed superior. Rawther began his quest to fend off new foes throughout lands of untold mystery. His new mission was to travel to Kiwike and to fight off enemies and restore peace to another land.

Saera · 05-03-2012, 21:32,

Much much better. Only thing left is to post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...d__st__100 and you will be whitelisted Laugh

smellityet · 05-04-2012, 00:44,

(05-03-2012, 21:32)Saera Wrote: Much much better. Only thing left is to post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...d__st__100 and you will be whitelisted

He asked me to post it for him: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...__14703888